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Eyes Dark Black

January 14, 2014

The first time I saw…

Eyes Dark Black

Red Fire Burn

in Depths

I Fell Down

not Come Out

Evil Heart

Eat of Self

Burn my Soul

Lose Hope

Wilt, Fade


New Birth

Fresh Life

Wrath of God.

33 Words in response to Trifecta: Trifextra Week 100, a 33-word response to the snippet “The first time I saw…” Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each.

  1. Wow, with this style you’ve seemed to cram so much in here. Some great word choice. Thanks for including your link in the comments 🙂

  2. I agree, you made the most of your words. I feel like I just lived the circle of life in 38 words!

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