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Eyes Dark Black

January 14, 2014

The first time I saw…

Eyes Dark Black

Red Fire Burn

in Depths

I Fell Down

not Come Out

Evil Heart

Eat of Self

Burn my Soul

Lose Hope

Wilt, Fade

Die

New Birth

Fresh Life

Wrath of God.

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33 Words in response to Trifecta: Trifextra Week 100, a 33-word response to the snippet “The first time I saw…” Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each.
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/

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3 Comments
  1. Wow, with this style you’ve seemed to cram so much in here. Some great word choice. Thanks for including your link in the comments 🙂

  2. I agree, you made the most of your words. I feel like I just lived the circle of life in 38 words!

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